“UnderOver”–a poem by me.
The voice in this one is a little different than usual, but I kinda like it–less formal. I think it could robably still use a little polishing, but I’m calling it mostly done–what do you think?
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If there’s one kind of writing I love most, it’s that which celebrates the otherwise unsung. The everyday things which are part of our lives, but the might have stopped seeing. BRAVA xxx
I love how you’ve woven the poetic with the annoyed pettiness. Makes me a bit sorry por the poor thing 😆
@larouau12 and @incredifishface so glad you liked it! I was poking around the internet to find prompts to send a writing partner and ran across one to write about bridges. I’m not sure why I thought about our sad little overpass and not some grand structure, but there you are!
And you know I just noticed that everything after the “no” is one very long sentence! I’m not sure how I managed that!
The gradual slope of the last few words is a nice touch: it both illustrates the unsleddability of the hill and conveys kind of a feeling of letdown.
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